There are sparklers in the back of my throat, and you're just itching to dynamite
this joint.
(A rift of twitches, from an orange twit.)
I'm a fighting last chance, a choke-battered tongue serum
tangerine sweat retained behind a layer of
plastic wrap
and I crinkle whenever you slide into my shiver of a short-leashed field mouse
with dandelion claws stuck in its spinning wheel of a
spine.
(And by dandelion, I mean poppy.)
I always love it when I can slurp up the spasms, and you're the perfect paint thinner
to finish the job.
So load your heat into the barrel of my heart rate
twiddle your toes
and let her rip through my fucking synapse.















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When it comes to things that move I either want to kill it, have sex with it, or eat it... Sometimes all three, in that order.
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If there's nothing nice to say don't say anything at all
-Thumper
If this was true the world would be speechless
You're really very good, I enjoy your style.
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All in all, I'd say,
the world is strangling.
-Anne Sexton
I guess they wouldn't be upset by my putting it on deviantART, but it's when people try to be "deep" and "meaningful" at inappropriate times in inappropriate places that they-- and I as well-- get kind of annoyed.
Thanks, though. I appreciate your compliments. :]
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And my Dad put his head in to say it was time for dinner and then he wanted to see what was so funny. But we didn't want to say.
Then Dad came over to see and Brad was eating foil.
I do agree, though, "deep" thoughts in certain situations can be annoying.
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All in all, I'd say,
the world is strangling.
-Anne Sexton
There are sparklers in the back of my throat, and you're just itching to dynamite
this joint.
(A rift of twitches, from an orange twit.)
I'm a fighting last chance, a choke-battered tongue serum
and also your oxymoronic line at the end, is really clever. You write clever and interesting poetry.
and let her rip through my fucking synapse.
Occasionally your turn of phrase can be a little tough to slog through, but then again so was Milton and he's an absolute genius.
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When it comes to things that move I either want to kill it, have sex with it, or eat it... Sometimes all three, in that order.
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